Bismark was suspect of Karl Marx's ideas on socialism as set out in the Communist Manifesto, and Marx's ideas had little impact on Bismark's policies during the 19th century unification of Germany.
Julie-I really like the ideas in your thesis, but when reading it, it sounds a little abrupt. I don't know what your preceding sentences will be so you could have it set up already, but maybe starting with a counter argument (although...) would make it run a little smoother. Other than that it looks great!
Julie-I really like the ideas in your thesis, but when reading it, it sounds a little abrupt. I don't know what your preceding sentences will be so you could have it set up already, but maybe starting with a counter argument (although...) would make it run a little smoother. Other than that it looks great!
ReplyDeletebrilliant. heh. eventhough its a little on the short side i think your thesis is clear and direct which is a good way to start a paper. so rock on hah
ReplyDeleteI agree with Madi that you just need to add a brief counteragrument, otherwise it looks great!
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