I like the angle you take here with Darwin/religion, but one way to make your thesis stronger could be to incorporate your counter argument using a "Although... (CA), thesis"
You have a great start here! If you are still writing your paper, I imagine you are having a difficult time covering this entire topic! My advice would be to find a peripheral thesis to narrow your argument.
dotssss i agree with everyone else about a counter argument...also maybe in your thesis you could briefly mention one or two scientific theories that you will be talking about
I like the angle you take here with Darwin/religion, but one way to make your thesis stronger could be to incorporate your counter argument using a "Although... (CA), thesis"
ReplyDeleteSup NAIJA BOY,
ReplyDeleteThesis needs conterargument to put personal opinion in context.
Dots,
ReplyDeleteYou have a great start here! If you are still writing your paper, I imagine you are having a difficult time covering this entire topic! My advice would be to find a peripheral thesis to narrow your argument.
This is a really cool approach to Darwin. My only suggestion would be to beef it up a bit by adding a counter-argument.
ReplyDeletedotssss i agree with everyone else about a counter argument...also maybe in your thesis you could briefly mention one or two scientific theories that you will be talking about
ReplyDeleteI agree with your thesis but maybe be specific on what Darwin's arguments were in your thesis (evolution)
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